Ah, foreshadowing in fiction writing.
Those tiny little breadcrumbs that give the readers something to guess at and figure out. Done the right way, when the plot device comes to fruition, your readers will swoon because they were able to put it all together without it being spelled out to them. No one likes a predictable storyline, but everyone loves to be able to figure out what happens. And this is where knowing exactly how and when to use foreshadowing can help you turn that good story into a s0-damn-I-good-couldn't-put-it-down novel.
Tips to use Effective Foreshadowing in Fiction Writing
Plant a question in the reader's mind.
The point of foreshadowing is to plant a question in the reader's mind — not to give away all the answers. A man comes home to find his gun missing from the gun rack on his wall. You, the reader, will question where the gun went to. And when that gun shows back up later in the story, you'll say “Ah-ha!!” But hopefully you won't say “I knew his wife grabbed it.”
Speaking of Chekhov's gun…
Anton Chekhov once said “Remove everything that has no relevance to the story. If you say in the first chapter that there is a rifle hanging on the wall, in the second or third chapter it absolutely must go off. If it's not going to be fired, it shouldn't be hanging there.”
Although I am more lenient on the whole second or third chapter time limit, I do agree with the rest. If it's in there, it should be relevant to the story or move the plot along. This is in part because of a reader's love to try to figure it all out. No one likes to finish a book thinking “but what about the fact that he came home and his gun was missing? What was that all about?“
Be selective about which events you want to foreshadow.
Foreshadowing your major events is crucial. But not every event needs to have that seed planted. If you start foreshadowing every single event throughout your novel, not only will you dilute the importance of the events themselves, but you'll also drag out the story into an excruciatingly slow tale. Foreshadow pivotal moments, and leave the rest alone.
Be careful of your timing.
Place a foreshadow too early in the story, and your readers may forget all about it by the time the event comes to pass. Place it too late in the story, and it won't strike the reader enough to give that all-important “ah-ha” moment. The size of the shadow should also be relative to how far in advance the breadcrumb is being dropped. A foreshadow being told several chapters in advance should almost be invisible, perhaps with a second shadow somewhere inbetween that and the plot point in question.
Make sure the size of your foreshadowing matches the payoff.
How many times have you read a book or watched a movie in which the foreshadowing was so great, and the tension built up so much, that you actually felt let down when the event finally happened? The more you foreshadow an event, the bigger that event needs to be. Your readers won't care about how amazing the book was up until that point. The only thing left in their minds will be that let down, and it will be mentioned in every review.
Foreshadowing is an important piece to your story. Whether you plan out your novel and add in the foreshadows along the way, or plant the majority of your foreshadowing during revisions, you and your readers will be glad you spent the time developing them.
Did you enjoy this article? Here are some more posts on writing you might like:
- The Trick to Finding Time to Write
- Writing Evil Characters
- Self-Editing: The Other Side of Writing
- Stop Saying Writing Fantasy is Easy
- How Reading will Improve your Writing… one of the worst writing cliches out there
Foreshadowing in Fiction FAQ
What is a good example of foreshadowing?
A good example is when you have a scene that shows a hint of something yet to come. For example, if your main character comes home to find the lock on her liquor cabinet is open, then in a future scene we should find out why it was open.
How do you find foreshadowing in a story?
Foreshadowing usually occurs at the beginning of the chapter (though not always, it could also be used as a means of driving suspense at the end of a chapter) and near the beginning of the story. Be on the lookout for details that don't seem to have a resolution and seem almost random in comparison to the rest of the story.
What are the elements of foreshadowing?
Some elements of foreshadowing might include a dialogue between two or more characters, a strange object within the setting that didn't need to be mentioned, a prophecy, or a quick event with no explanation.
When should you use foreshadowing?
Use foreshadowing whenever you want to build suspense to a major event or turning point within your story.